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I loved this stanza: Maybe I'm too young to sit on beer soaked steps and watch the night bleed violently into day but nothing has ever made me feel so ...

The poem had great imagery. I loved this stanza espicially: I could sit with pen in my hand Write me an ocean on how You make me feel so bad ...

Well, I'm guessing this poem is about Kingdom Hearts. Maybe I'm wrong, but you have a Kingdom Hearts icon and the poem seems severely tied to it. Unfortunately, I think ...

The sun sets on a cloudless day As trumpets blare and soldier’s march In dreams, of course, since time decays More often ought then not It bleeds, the sky, a ...

That was beautiful? I love the figurative-ness (the way you compared yourself to the diary) and your metaphors (the screaming girl on stage). All in all, the way your phrased ...

I really liked the way your wrote this, though I did have to read it a handful of times to make sense of it. The description and words you used ...

Sweaty Like Sunday mornings And coffee And sex Awakening beside A one-night stand Realizing it’s your cousin Sun dress Low cut to suit Her breasts Wonders why she’s raped Yes, ...

I sleep in coffee grinds and cigarette butts My daughter is in the bathroom making her cuts My son’s out on the front pouch with a bag of industrial glee ...

Well, I, frankly, was let down. It was okay, but reasonably cliche. The whole reference to death freeing people is insanely overused and was never that beautiful to begin with. ...

Wow. I loved the way you did this - the theme is wonderful, the title is suiting and interesting, and everything you said opened up a new door or window ...

Yes, you definitely handled the line breaks well - it certainly added to the rhythmic nature of the poem. The way I perceived the poem, it had a strong rhythm, ...

You did certainly dabble with sweetness over the whole vulgarity of the poem. I enjoyed it, really, in a sick sort of way. Which, I suppose, is the main point ...

The point was sort of repeated and such, but all in all it was one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read - it had rhythm, it was beautiful ...

Enduring slander by peers As it endures Tripping over lips As smooth as 24/7 sexual activity With the mailman Hug and kisses And pen marks Battle each other to the ...

Dear, give me some different words Another speech, another form To flow throughout my body While I connect my eyes with yours It’s an inspiring feeling A jolt-shock of sugary ...